Post by Rakko, Brink, Serval, Soubi on Feb 22, 2007 20:45:31 GMT -5
Destruction:
No where to go,
I'm Blind and Cant' see,
The world that's right in front of me.
No where to go,
I'm deaf and can't here,
The world around me that is so near.
No where to go,
I can speak to the world
And they will know I'm here.
But I can't hear their voices,
Or see their faces
And I won't know a thing,
As the world around me dies.
Secrets:
What would you do,
If I said I was blind,
That I had never seen yer face?
What would you say,
If I said I knew ye
Better than Yerself?
What would ye here,
If I said I loved ye,
And that I always had?
What would ye have said,
If I had told ye I was dead,
And had never lived a day?
I like 'Secrets' better, and so does my friend. Also, coments are accepted and wiedly appriciated. And I don't mind flames, pleas! tell me how I can improve!
No where to go,
I'm Blind and Cant' see,
The world that's right in front of me.
No where to go,
I'm deaf and can't here,
The world around me that is so near.
No where to go,
I can speak to the world
And they will know I'm here.
But I can't hear their voices,
Or see their faces
And I won't know a thing,
As the world around me dies.
Secrets:
What would you do,
If I said I was blind,
That I had never seen yer face?
What would you say,
If I said I knew ye
Better than Yerself?
What would ye here,
If I said I loved ye,
And that I always had?
What would ye have said,
If I had told ye I was dead,
And had never lived a day?
I like 'Secrets' better, and so does my friend. Also, coments are accepted and wiedly appriciated. And I don't mind flames, pleas! tell me how I can improve!